
which is why i'm taking the time to read up on 'how to create the perfect messy side bun' right now.
but when i'm done procrastinating, of note for novel:
-i need a street, gypsy character; hooded harlequin: idealist but desperate, flimsily brilliant.
-i need a charming user villain: so full of entertaining creativity he gets away with being a narcissist sociopath.
- i need jolene character's background to be sufficiently planned prior, to accomplish an organic depiction of transition from creepy controlled certainty to wide-eyed, desperate uncertainty. EVERYTHING taken away. Make the reader feel it, make the reader care.